Essay yazımını kolaylaştıracak kalıplar ve bağlaçlar

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INTRODUCTION

Ø The question of whether English instruction at university should be obligatory has been debated for decades.

Ø ... is a complex phenomenon.

Ø … is a controversial issue. (çelişkili, tartışmalı konularda)

THESIS

Ø … has major advantages/effects/results/etc. in terms of … (noun) and … (noun)

Ø Obesity has two major effects: one on health and the other on social life.

Ø Getting university education at a private university is advantageous (avantajlı) for a variety (çeşitli) of reasons.

SUPPORT/BODY

Ø 1. The first reason/etc. that is worth mentioning (bahsedilmeye değer) is home working.

Ø 2.The rationale behind(gerisindeki mantık) working from home is to reduce the time which is

spent in traffic.

Ø 3.That is to say/In other words/To put it another way, ...

Ø One significant result/etc. of getting promotion is a higher income.

Ø Another equally(aynı ölçüde) important effect/etc. is ...

Ø A further noteworthy(bahse değer) reason/etc. of ... is ...

Ø Another reason/etc. of why a person should receive education in private school is related to (alakalı) technology.

EXAMPLES

Ø Result of a survey conducted in various companies(çeşitli şirketlerle yürütülmüş araştırma sonuçları)show that ...

Ø The result of a survey indicate(göstermek) that ...

Ø Polls(anket) show that, ...

END OF THE PARAGRAPHS

Ø All in all, ...

Ø In conclusion, ...

Ø Consequently, ...

Ø As a result of this, ...

CONCLUSION

Ø In the light of the information given above, ... (yukarıda verilen bilgilerin ışığında)

Ø To summarize all my points that I explained so far, ... (şimdiye kadar açıkladığım tüm noktaları özetlersek)

 LINKERS

Ø Although (rağmen) he wasn’t hungry, he ate the sandwiches. +full sentence

Ø Despite (rağmen) her sadness, she smiled. +noun

Ø In spite of (rağmen) being crowded, dormitories are good for student to socialize. +full sentence

Ø Regardless of the fact that (bu konudan bağımsız olarak)

Ø Regardless of their level students makes basic mistakes.

Ø Obese people not only suffer from physical problems but also face social restrictions.

Ø Due to the fact that (because of) +full sentence

Ø Apart from (haricinde)

Ø Unlike (aksine)

Ø Nevertheless(but, however)

Ø Otherwise (aksi takdirde)

Ø Doubtless to say, (şüphesiz ki/söylemeye gerek bile yok ki)

Ø ... indeed (in fact, cümle sonunda kullanılır.)

Ø Whatever it takes (ne gerekirse)

Ø It is certain that ... (şu belli ki)

Ø It is a fact that (şu bir gerçek ki)

Ø When compared to (kıyaslandığında)

Ø Whereas (on the other hand)

Ø Particularly (özellikle)

Ø Among others (diğerlerinin arasında)

SAMPLE SENTENCES

Ø English has an undeniable (reddedilemez) importance in business life.

Ø Writing essay require (gerektirmek) grammar knowledge.

Ø Everything has its drawbacks. (her şeyin sakıncaları/dezavantajları vardır)

Ø Work comprises (oluşturmak) an important part of human life.

Ø People work primarily (firstly, öncelikle) for money.

Ø Students who attend office hours are more likely (daha büyük olasılıkla) to pass than the ones who don’t.

Ø Look/seem worse than it really is. (olduğundan daha kötü görünüyor)

Ø Vocabulary enables (olanak vermek) us to articulate (ifade etmek) ourselves.

             

Advantages of technology in education

Topic : what are the advantages that technology provides in field on education ?
1-) Financial Aspect
a-campus life
b-university's fees

2-)Development of skills
a-literacy
b-numeracy


In tandem with development of technology the copious differences were observed in people's life and technology affected a lots fields of human's life.One of these fields is education. There is no doupt that in today's world technology has an undeniable importance in education. In education, innovations such as corrospondent education and reinforcement of skills such as literacy can be associated with changing technology. Therefore, it's possible to claim that technology provides a highly vital advantages especially due to several crucial aspects such as financial and devolopment of skills for students.

Initialy, corrospondent education which emerges from improvment of technology as a neccesity in education possitively contributes to budget in terms of financial. The first observable fiscal advantage that is worth mentioned is decreasing expenditure in campus life. The expenditures in campus consist of fundemental neccesities such as dormitory, transportation and food-beverage. Total cost of these is substantial amount of money. Nonethales, on the contrary, using computer and having internet are sufficient for corrospendent education.Therefore, it provides inexpensive education for students. To illustrate, outcome of a survey conducted among various student groups indicates that more student prefer corrospondent education why  it's inexpensive and beneficial. Another benefit of why corrospendent education has a utmost significance in terms of fiscal is releated to university's fees. Some students want to receive main education for their own aims in life such as getting a job. Having a certificate is adequate to get a job. Therefore, they trade-off between corrospondance education and high education. Expectedly they prefer corrospondent education owing to their own basic aims because annual fees of universities is very expansive. In conclusion, technology provides a basis for corrospondent education and thus it plays a crucial role in personal budget in terms of financial.

TO BE CONTİNUED :)

Yazarken neye dikkat edelim ?

Yazmaya başlamadan önce bir kaç tavsiye vermek istiyorum. Kendinize bir fiil listesi çıkarın özellikle upper ve advanced kurlarında ki readingleri inceleyerek. Birde geçmişte yazdığınız essaylare bakıp en sık kullandığınız işinize en çok yarayacak sıfat ve zarları belirleyin, ve yine aynı şekilde sıfat ve zarf listesi çıkarın. Özellikle eş anlamlılarını bulun.
Yazarken Şaban Demirkol arkadaşımızn söylediği gramer tekniğini kullanmaya dikkat edelim. Nedir bu,
Noun clause
Perfect tense
Causative
Passive
Relative
If type 1-2-3
Bu yazılanları en az bir cümlede bile olsa kullanmak. Çünkü bir cümlede bile doğru kullansak okuyan hocanın gözünde bu gramer konusunu biliyor olarak gözükeceğiz ve notumuz durduk yere artacak.Nerede kullanacam dediğinizi duyuyorum :) Kasmıyoruz kendimizi, perfect tense intoda kullanılabilir, future tense opinion kısmında kullanılabilir, noun clause thesis statement yada supporting idea verilirken kullanılabilir, passive ve causative her yerde kullanılabilir.
SON olarak yazarken konuyu düşünün ve aklınıza gelen ilk cümleyi yazın. Yazarken duraksayıp şöyle yazsam daha iyi olurdu diye düşündüğümüz an kaybettiğimiz andır çünkü tüm organizasyonu değiştirmek zorunda kalıyoruz bir cümleyi değiştirdik diye.Bugün farkına vardım sizde de oluyordur belki :)

Neden böyle bir işe giriştim ?

Öncelikle başka üniversitelerde okuyan arkadaşlarımın "hazırlığı mı geçemedin ? " gibi alaycı sorularından bunaldım ve bu okulun hazırlığının sanıldığı kadar kolay olmadığını anlatmak istedim. Alın işte yazdıklarım, belgelerle geldim bu sefer :) :)
İkinci olarak benimle aynı dertten muzdarip arkadaşların yararlanabileceği materyaller yüklemek, umarım yararlanan birileri çıkar :)

Bugün düşündüm de işallah Trace'i geçersem 4sene boyunca devam ettirecem bu bloğu.

Brain and Gender

Nature created humanity whereas it basiclly created humanity as two genderes , these are male and female. However, males and females are different from each other. One person, who looks human body from outside, sees some differences. Even if male and female body seems like same, in fact there are no resemblances between man and women body’s some parts. One of these parts which is not resemblance each other, is brain.  Differences in brain effect human life from many aspects such as social life, medicine. In generally, structural and reactional differences play a very important role to be understood of differences between men and women’s brain by everyone.

First of all, structural differences in women and men brain influence some aspects such as mathematic ability and language due to hemisphere variety.  Some differences are seen between structures of gender’s hemispheres. Firstly, it affects mathematic ability. Left side of hemisphere is control center of mathematical ability and problem-solving and this section of the brain is used differently by man and woman. Source of this difference is brain size. Men’s left hemisphere is larger than woman’s left hemisphere. Therefore, men tend to use more mathematical ability than women. For example, Einstein who is groundbreaking person for science world has ability to use mathematical amazingly because the research shows that Einstein’s left side is abnormally large. Secondly, it affects language ability. Two hemispheres of brain are utilized for language. Men only process language in their dominant hemispheres but women process language in both hemispheres. That is, woman learns a foreign language faster than man. In conclusion, mathematic ability and language play important role to prove structural differences between men and women brain.

Reactions differences in men and women brain influence some behavioral ways against pain and stress owing to hormones and amygdala. Hormones and chemicals which are produced by women and men are not same and even if some hormones are same, these hormones are secreted in different rate in women and men’s body. Therefore, some problems occur in body differently. Firstly, different reactions which are rooted in hormones in the face of stress are sees. Hormone of stress is secreted in everyone, this hormone is called oxytocin. Estrogen which is secreted hormone by women’s brain increases an oxytocin resulting, testosterone hormone which is produced by men’s brain, decrease effect of oxytocin. Therefore, men show aggressive behaves in the face of stress while women approach as befriend to stress. Secondly, amygdala which effect sense of pain provide to be feels pain differently by women and men. Amygdala is activated during pain and while right side of amygdale is activated in man, left side of amygdale is activated in women. Task of right side is about external functions but task of left side is about internal functions. Therefore, women more feel pain than men. Medicine produces a lot of painkiller for this cause. In conclusion, pain and stress play important role in order to exhibit reactions differences between men and women’s brain.

To sum up, Women and men are not same and some variety exists between both them. Differences in brain which effect human lives from many aspects such as social life, medicine are structural and reactions differences. Structural variety effects mathematical ability and language because of difference hemisphere. Reaction variety affects to behave in the face of pain and stress due to hormones and some part of brain. In my opinion, men and women always have been different whereas if these differences did not exist, women and men would not learn to live together.  Difference is beatiful.

 Hasan Zafer